It is not a good idea to make art and music lessons part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is a widespread debate about

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recently. Some people point out that it is no need to change

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to compulsory courses in school.

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essay will discuss

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whether these

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are not appropriate to become mandatory because it is

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time consuming

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and cannot cover all the

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interest

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and

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are usually

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time consuming

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and cause interruption to other courses. These

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inevitably take a lot of

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if the teachers want to increase

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learning quality.

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, other compulsory subjects

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as English and Maths may be interrupted. For the

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, it is difficult to complete a painting in a short period of

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because

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need to draft and paint carefully. Same as the

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,

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need to do plenty of

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activities which help them to sing better before the main session.

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, it is obvious that

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should not be mandatory as they use other significant

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. It is

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noticeable that

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cannot

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satisfy every

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students’

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interest.

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, which provide various learning opportunities, should be responsible to discover

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’ potential

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different areas.

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, if

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become mandatory,

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are likely to have

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chances to choose what they

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for

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and have

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development.

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,

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who have no talent

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are easily distracted in

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. What if they learn other things that are suitable for them

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of taking

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boring

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?

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, in order to give

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enough freedom,

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and

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should remain elective. In conclusion,

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be

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elective

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will be better as they occupy the previous

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of other critical

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and restrict the development of all the

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.