Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Economic

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The economic

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development

of

nation

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a nation

the nation

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is necessary

in

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for

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becoming a developed

nation

. Several government authorities

considers

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consider

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that the utmost priority is to gain more wealth while others feel that various

progress

should be undertaken as there are

also

necessary for Nations

development

. Economic growth and

development

is

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are

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a wish of many government personnel.

Firstly

, there is a strong

believe

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belief

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that if the

nation

is stronger

than

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then

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the outcome will be good and will help in various aspects.

Moreover

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,Moreover

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if the

nation

is economically strong and stable it might insure various facilities

to

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for

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its

citizen

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citizens

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like cheap education, low Hospital fees and many more which will help in increasing

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standard

standards

standaed

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the standaed

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of living. Another side many people think that other

source

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sources

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of

progress

should

also

be given equal opportunity. The point is there should be many

classification

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classifications

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done to support

many

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much

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other

progress

. In another word

development

should be made in schools and hospitals and many government subsidies should be provided to

agriculture

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the agriculture

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sector to increase the living standard ;

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, subsidies should be provided with free learning courses so that they can learn new methods and ways of farming which will directly be helpful for the economic

development

.

Ithink

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I think

there are many types of

progress

which

which

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are important for our society as competition is high with the neighbouring countries. If we want to increase the economy

than

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then

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schemes should be provided for higher education and Medical Services. In conclusion

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,

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even if the economic

development

of the

nation

is important we should not forget the overall

progress

of the country

as per

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apply

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my point of view