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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

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It may seem that communication via the internet plays a crucial role in the present day.
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social media has drawbacks directly to
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adolescent
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about
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 interaction with other people while someone
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 that it is an advantageous method. In
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both sides and provide samplers from my experience. Owning the fact that cyber social can affect
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young people in
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ways
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Firstly
, face to face conversation is better than text on the application.
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 on the application for a long time,
they
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will make a mistake when they are among the people.
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, social bullying is
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these days because no one
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 illustrates, a harassment
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 human can impact
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some teenager and become to depression decease.
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, some
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 believe that it still has a benefit to put together proficiently. According to easiness, everyone will talk or text messages, if that place has WI-FI.
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 my experience, I can make a meeting room or a video conference online by some program on my smartphone.
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, a chance to make a new friend who has
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 activity is easier than
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 past times.
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, in the social media club, they can attend to some room that
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with
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their preferred thing. In conclusion, social media has become an essential part of all ages since the smartphone was developed by
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enormous company.
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, it has
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both
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about
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society, especially the youngster.
Thus
, they should use
this
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