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People believe that the creation of public sports will encourage people to do more sports

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The idea of whether the creation of more
sports
facilities
 in the community will benefit the general population's
health
 has been a topic of discussion for the
last
 decade. Some argued that
health
 and
fitness
 should be a matter of each individual and most
people
 will not take the initiative of starting an
exercise
 program to improve their
health
 without an education plan in place from the government. In my ,opinion I believe that building more
sports
facilities
 in conjunction with a viable diet and
fitness
 program will benefit the general population with their well-being.
People
 living in rural areas most commonly have a variety of natural outdoor spaces where they can take advantage to recreate and do activities out there in the fresh air, all for free, to keep fit and healthy depending on their own choices. Studies have shown that only half an hour of daily walk preferably outdoors improves
health
, and lowers the risk of obesity, diabetes, heart disease and other common
health
 issues can improve dramatically with daily
exercise
 accompanied by a well-balanced diet.
On the other hand
,
people
 who live in cities and have busy lives could potentially be affected by time and the lack of
sports
facilities
 available, which may shorten their possibilities of attending a
fitness
 facility. Building gymnasiums, public
sports
 centres, and installing
exercise
 machines in public places around urban areas,
this
 initiative definitely will encourage
people
 to increase their
fitness
 activity. In my ,opinion the creation of a variety of newly accessible public
sports
facilities
, and new resources to educate
people
 about how to look after their
health
 and
exercise
 regularly with a healthy diet will benefit not only each individual but
also
 public
health
 in general.
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