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Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say Why do you want to work from home? Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself? Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home.

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Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing
this
 letter to require permission to avail the facility of
work
 from
home
 which has already been permitted to some of the employees of our department. At the onset, due to
corona
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 pandemic, it is perilous for any person to reach the office and impart duties there. Basically, I require
this
work
 from
home
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 option because of two reasons,
first
 I
work
 on
Life
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a Life
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 Insurance case authorization seat that nowhere requires any manual record to check,
second
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 I have recently tested positive
with
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 Covid-19 so my immunity level is not appropriate to
work
 in the office
atmposphere
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atmosphere
.
However
, I would like to say that if I get
the
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permission to
work
 from
home
, It will be helpful to reduce the backlog of about 1500 files
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last
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 two years and I can take care of myself well without requesting
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any medical leave.
Furthermore
, there are some arrangements that are necessary for me to avail
this
 option. Primarily, permission to use
office
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 Laptop at my
home
 along with
internet
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 dongle.
Moreover
,
Mr.
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 Harry Robinson, the system manager, can
authroize
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authorize
 me to use the dump folder where all these cases are in PDF
file
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 along with our company's signing software so I can check that files and give my remarks on these.
Hence
, I assure you
this
 arrangement will certainly be conducive for our company as well as for me. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Ron Johnson
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