Recently your employer offered some employees to do some work directly from home. Write a letter to your manger requesting the same arrangement. You should say Why do you want to work from home? Why would it be beneficial for the company and yourself? Suggest a suitable arrangement for you to work from home.

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Dear Sir, With due respect, I am writing

this

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letter to require permission to avail the facility of

work

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from

home

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which has already been permitted to some of the employees of our department. At the onset, due to

corona

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the corona

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pandemic, it is perilous for any person to reach the office and impart duties there. Basically, I require

this

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work

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from

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home

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a home

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option because of two reasons,

first

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work

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Life

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a Life

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Insurance case authorization seat that nowhere requires any manual record to check,

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second

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and second

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I have recently tested positive

with

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for

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Covid-19 so my immunity level is not appropriate to

work

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in the office

atmposphere

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atmosphere

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, I would like to say that if I get

the

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apply

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permission to

work

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from

home

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, It will be helpful to reduce the backlog of about 1500 files

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last

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the last

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two years and I can take care of myself well without requesting

for

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apply

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any medical leave.

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, there are some arrangements that are necessary for me to avail

this

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option. Primarily, permission to use

office

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the office

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Laptop at my

home

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along with

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an internet

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dongle.

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Mr.

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Harry Robinson, the system manager, can

authroize

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authorize

me to use the dump folder where all these cases are in PDF

file

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files

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along with our company's signing software so I can check that files and give my remarks on these.

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, I assure you

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arrangement will certainly be conducive for our company as well as for me. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours sincerely, Ron Johnson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

245 words

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