These days it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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to different countries has grown recently and has become easier than many years ago. I believe these changes have brought more benefits than a disadvantage for both
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and the host country.
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development impacts their economy and
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. By visiting various parts of the world people can know others' cultures. If people travel easily they would communicate with foreigners, and learn about their
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, history, and diet which results in positively
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their own lifestyle.
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, some people may forget their own attitudes, rights, and their country's
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completely. But, all cultures are respectful and
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should slightly enhance the host
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,
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issue may occur hardly ever.
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, improving the tourism industry can impact the economic situation. The more a country has tourists, the better they would gain income.
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, citizens of that area can make use of
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development and have better living standards.
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, provided that nations went on trips abroad more frequently, they may lose interest in visiting the attractions of their own land.
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, their state may be harmed and faces financial problems.
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, it is better to maintain a balance in going overseas, but other residents visit those places as well, so
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would not be a detrimental effect. In conclusion, the being effortless
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to various countries for all societies in comparison with the past
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has some impacts. Generally, the positive points are much higher than
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negative points
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and the economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • boost local economies
  • cultural exchange
  • mutual understanding
  • environmental degradation
  • deforestation
  • overcrowding
  • commodification
  • authentic cultural experiences
  • revenue
  • perspective
  • globalization
  • sustainable tourism
  • heritage sites
  • local customs
  • appreciation of diversity
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