Some people believe that it is the government’s responsibility to provide care and finance to support people after they retire. Others, however, think that individuals themselves should save money in their own when they are old. Discuss both views and give your opinion. > DISCUSS AND OPINION

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of all,plenty of international tourism promotions have widened the tourists’ interest about travel abroad.As a classic question and answer by George Herbert Leigh Mallory and the reporter of New York Times about why he enjoys hiking,he said the reason is that the mountain is here.It has to be admitted that both new culture and unknown adventure deeply catch their excited hearts.

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,during the process of a sweeping trend of exchanges between countries,it is much easier for tourists to have an international trip.A simple case in point is that 10 years ago if a person wants to travel abroad in China,he would prepare his procedure a month in advance;

in contrast

,he can start his trip three days from the time he had

this

idea. From my point of view,the international

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wave can bring many benefits.Obviously,the new tape of trips can enhance cultural exchanges

such

as the global popularity of Chinese food and western cuisine.

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,

this

trend

also

helps improve

countries

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economy

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and develops their service industry.

For instance

,France,New Zealand,India,Thailand and so on are the beneficiary of

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wave.Among these countries,tourism accounts for nearly 20

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of Thailand’s gross domestic products and most of these accounts are provided

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international tourists.