Many large cities are facing house crisis because they cannot provide enough place for new buildings. Some local governments believe that the problem can be solved by repurposing the park land for residential development because this land is better used for houses. Do you agree or disagree?

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with the ever-increasing population, metropolitans have difficulty in providing accommodation to the people.

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, it is now suggested that public

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should be replaced by residential construction as they can accommodate several homeless people. I do not find

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proposal reasonable since

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are the main source of entertainment and they provide verdant greenery to the urban areas. To start with the

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statement, it goes without saying that

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are the central places where city dwellers choose to socialize.

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places offer a variety of facilities

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as playgrounds for youngsters and children,

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elderly citizens enjoy laughter and yoga classes there. Above all, being crime-prone areas, people in cities hesitate to allow their young ones to go out ;

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, recreational centres are considered safer in

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cases. If residential buildings are constructed city dwellers will be disconnected from their community as they consider them communal forums.

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, cities are combating pollution problems on a larger scale. Needless to say, the hike in the number of vehicles and factories has worsened the environmental condition. In

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situation,the only solution to regulate

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phenomenon is to grow trees and present green cover since trees absorb carbon dioxide,the most dangerous gas on the earth. The actual need of the hour is reforestation ,not deforestation, whatever the reason will be. To solve the accommodation challenge, several other alternatives can be introduced and building skyscrapers can be the most effective strategy. It will not only preserve our mother earth but

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the housing crisis will be dealt

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a larger extent.

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, Mumbai and Calcutta, the famous cities in India, have addressed issues by constructing multi-storey buildings. In conclusion, eradicating

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for building houses seems an illogical idea and

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it must not be adopted since they provide a number of recreational activities to the locals and help save

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environmental issues.

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