Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?

This

has been a drastic debate over whether is good or not for

countries

becoming

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more and more similar due to people

are

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able to buy the same

products

anywhere. In

this

essay, I will discuss both these views and give my own opinion on the matter.

Firstly

, I will explore the way

this

innovation has changed the way human beings

to

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have similar

products

and

secondly

, I will share the drawbacks of

this

trend.

To begin

with, my attitude towards it is positive, I believe the case of

this

can be beneficial. In

this

case where we can buy the same

products

anywhere in a kind of globalization. In

this

situation, we can benefit a lot from it. 1st opinion, it will help to narrow the gaps between rich

countries

and poor

countries

. Poor

countries

derive

right

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to buy commodities as same as the rich

one

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.

In addition

, buying the same

products

anywhere is able to promote

a

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competition among the retailers, which can not only lower the price of goods

,

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but

also

better the quality.

Besides

,

this

kind of change will

effects

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the other

states

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economics. Because of

this

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some

countries

became

power

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.

For

example

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if every nation

have

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same

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the same

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machineries

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its

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will direct impact on the export and import. In

this

process, it has a possibility for different

countries

to tighten their connection and strengthen communication, resulting in efficiency enhanced. In conclusion, I imagine that

this

kind of fusion of market is positive, not only can it benefit customers, but

also

do well

to

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the whole market. We are able to insist on globalization can all

of

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countries

profit from it.