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Printed materials are disappearing, and more and more E-publications are taking over. What are some of the advantages of E-publications.

#materials #e-publications
First
 and foremost,
E-
publications
 cost less than traditional
publications
.
For instance
,
E-
publications
 usually just need an
internet
 connection,
a
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software to write the subject and an
internet
 connection to share it. But traditional publication agencies need to spend money on transportation,
labor
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 costs, printing, rental fees and other necessities.
In addition
,
E-
publications
 could be sold
in
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 lower prices than hard books.
Next
,
E-
publications
 are more accessible than traditional printing
publications
.
For example
, once someone
have
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 got
internet
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 connection, e-books from large websites
such
 as
amazon
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 are available on
internet
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 at all times and everywhere.
Moreover
, E-books are always easier to carry as they can be saved and read
in
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 smartphones and laptops
at
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anywhere.
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 of all,
e-
publications
 are
more
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 environmentally
frienldy
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friendly
 option than traditional
publications
. Every year, millions of trees are cut down to produce papers,
e-
publications
 help to protect forests as they do not need papers to print on.
Moreover
,
e-
publications
 may help to reduce air pollution, as they do not need transportation. In conclusion,
e-
publications
 have many advantages
on
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 printing
publications
. E-books
needs
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 less expenditure to spend
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, they can be reached easily and they are more eco friendly.
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