SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT READING BOOKS FOR ENTERTAINMENT IS A WASTE OF CHILDREN’S TIME. THEY THINK THAT THEIR CHILDREN SHOULD READ ONLY SERIOUS EDUCATIONAL BOOKS. WHAT IS YOUR OPINION.

According to some people, reading
books
for entertainment is a waste of
children
's time. And these people want
children
to read-only educational
books
. I completely would not think that it is justified because
children
should read whatever they want for improving their reading habits.
therefore
, while some adults may like poetry, others may like financial
books
, because the concept of entertainment is different for every person. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.79
To begin
with, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental for
children
because they should do outdoor activities which is more enjoyable.
otherwise
, they can not be lived their own childhood and
this
situation will be caused by many different psychological problems.
For instance
, my cousin's family forced her to read-only educational
books
in her childhood and she never went out for playing with her friends.
therefore
she lived with many different psychological problems
such
as anxiety.83
On the other hand
,
this
is a problem which is being talked up by some as a very serious threat.
Although
these
children
's lesson score is good, they lose a lot of things in their life. Generally, parents think that
children
need a good lesson score to be a better future. Actually,
this
thought makes
children
standard human beings. but when they read financial
books
or subjects they enjoy., maybe they can be a very successful person.77 To sum up, if their parents force to
children
to read only one thing, these
children
will be unhappy in their whole life and they will work unliked jobs.
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