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some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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one of the most controversial issues today relates
kind
 of humans in their view its crucial function of
music
 in
this
 essay. lam going to analyze
this
 question appropriately from both points of view and
then
 give my own opinion on the matter on one side of
argument
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 there are people who argue that the benefits of it are true some
kind
 of
this
music
 special with sea tune give them emotional and feel comfortable in the goo mood considerably outweigh its disadvantages.
nonetheless
, the main reason for believing
this
 is as I see a lot of people specifically students and because they are always under pressure because the exam and assessments so usually they listen for
this
kind
 of
music
in addition
 despite in
other
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 world in
furthermore
 it is
also
 possible to say that people in nowadays they can live without
music
 theory thought can fixe their problem on listening to
kind
 of
music
 on the
first
 hand, it is
also
 possible to make the opposing case it's often argued that in fact, they begin to do it overall in general, a
second
 point is that a particularly a good instance there is all lot of solving
this
 problem like reading a book or hanging out with friends conclusion is in the middle of a paragraph are human they been in period depression that way the listen for relaxing
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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