some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax to what extent do you agree or disagree?

one of the most controversial issues today relates
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there are people who argue that the benefits of it are true some
kind
of
this
music
special with sea tune give them emotional and feel comfortable in the goo mood considerably outweigh its disadvantages.
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, the main reason for believing
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is as I see a lot of people specifically students and because they are always under pressure because the exam and assessments so usually they listen for
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music
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world in
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it is
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possible to say that people in nowadays they can live without
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theory thought can fixe their problem on listening to
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problem like reading a book or hanging out with friends conclusion is in the middle of a paragraph are human they been in period depression that way the listen for relaxing
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