Some people think women should be given equal chances to work and excel in their careers.Others believe that a women's role should be limited to taking care of the house and children. Which opinion do you agree with and why? Include specific details and examples to support your choice

Every
Person
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has to be treated equally and given the same amount of opportunity regardless of race, gender and status. Limiting people to a certain type of duty
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just cruel,but
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serious economic problems as well.
Thus
i
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have been convinced that
women
should have
opportunity
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to pursue their dreams to
fullest
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their fullest
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potential .
First
of all, limiting
women
to only
house
jobs was cruel and it
also
stripped freedom from ladies as well.
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,forcing
women
to work only in the
house
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made
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the
women
financially
depending
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on
her
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husbands,
thus
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her
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freedom.
Also
,forcing someone to do
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certain
type
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of jobs it's considered inhumane. What if
that
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that woman
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women
didn't like the
works
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of
house care
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, but she was forced to do it because of her gender. That's why in my opinion
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action is cruel and inhumane.
In addition
, The economic problem will be enormous if
women
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role were only permitted to
taking
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take
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care of the
house
.
For instance
, imagine if half of the
country
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population doesn't have income and
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skill
their
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they
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provide was
house
taking. The country would have only limited workforces, very few portions of
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the populations
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populations
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population
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that were paying taxes and at
last
almost half of the population that the governments needed to support.
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result
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limited
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limiting
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the roles of
a
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women
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women
was never
the
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reasonable decision. In conclusion,
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we
seen
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the downside of restricting
women
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women's
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roles in society both moral and economic.
This
make
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the idea of forcing
a roles
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to
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a specific genders
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a specific gender
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is
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unacceptable. Luckily, as we have progressed toward
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century these
kind
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of
idea
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were starting to
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away ,
thus
I believed that sooner or later we will be able to
created
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the
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society where an opportunity
were
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given equally.
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