You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an appartment.You left the appartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposits. Write a letter to landlord.In your letter Explain why you are writing Ask for teh return of your deposits Inform the landlord of possible legal action

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Dear Ritu, I am writing

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letter in regards to my advanced deposits when I started renting your apartment. As I told you earlier that I have

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of promotion which lets me shift to another city. Now, I got a higher rank in the organisation and have to move to another location.

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, I am unable to live at your flat as I have to find a new one in another city. Since I had left your place in a good condition and finds no valid reason for the hold of deposit which I paid to you

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the beginning of rent agreement. As it is pre-decided that the security money will be refunded to me in the case when I left the apartment.

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, At the time when I was leaving the place, I did not get the

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which should be returnable to me. While signing the agreement at the joining time, It is clearly mentioned that I will get back these deposits when I shift to another place and left the accommodation without any damage. But, I am afraid to say that If you refuse to pay it

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there is no option which is left for me but to take

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matter to court. Rent deed provides me help to bring my issue in the eyes of law. So, I asked you to please return my balance to avoid any legal action which spoils our relationship with each other. Regards. Yours Sincerely, Kuljeet Kaur

Submitted by kuljeetkaur19941 on Sat May 21 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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