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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages and disadvantages.

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As
time
 flows, modernization occurs, which forces every aspect of human life to go digital. Home routine can not stand as an exception, but does
this
 procedure bring advantages or disadvantages to
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human kind
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humankind
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. One evident benefit of
people
 going digital is surely
time
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 economy. In the past,
people
 used to spend so much
time
on
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doing housework neglecting the needs of other
stuff
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staff
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.
However
, nowadays
people
 dedicate more
time
 to more important things
such
 as family and self-development.
In addition
, modernization of home routine is one of the activities that cannot be escaped,
beacuse
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because
 as
people
 develop they
switcj
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switch
 all of their surroundings into technology. For
exemple
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example
, smart
house
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, self-navigating cleaners and so on.
On the other hand
, hove is
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 disadvantage of having your home
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 digital. When machines
supplent
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supplement
supplant
human
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humans
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in
particular
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 action, they might become overeliable on technology, and lose
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the ability
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 on doing
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thing
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 on
theirs
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 own.
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,
on
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 the
treshhold
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threshold
 of
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21st century
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people
 lost
capability
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 to wash dishes, because of the overusing the dishwasher machine.
Besides
, in some delicate
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 human attention is way more useful. For
exemple
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, now more and more law listeners, the ones who
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 -process, quit their jobs,
beacuse
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because
this
 profession getting digitalized.
However
,
sound
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 recorder contains all
kind
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kinds
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 of sounds, could it be some
unnessary
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unnecessary
 noise or mispronunciation.
Also
, some
intention
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intentions
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 in human speech can be recognized by no one, but
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human
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. In conclusion, both cases, going digital or not seem to have
own
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 pros and cons, but I feel that digitalizing must occur.
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