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o meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

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Enhancing the population of the world wildly has led to a high level of food dimension, so it causes insect consumption in some high populated
countries
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 to withstand a high level of opponents.in
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 kind of recipes
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 made from
Insects
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 and Reptiles. On the one hand, high diversity in
insects
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 around the world cause it as an easy cathed
source
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 of nutrition which is remarkably famous and favourite especially in the eastern
countries
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 as India, Thai, Malaysia and some other
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 whereas,they are precisely high-priced in aforementioned
countries
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 in compare of meal produced foods. but counting them as a rich
source
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 of ingredients is undeniable.
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,edible
insects
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 have become the main attraction of tourist who wants to taste new kind of foods and make a profound
source
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 of profit to these
countries
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.
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, some kinds of edible insect foods can be poisonous and harmful to human health too.
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,hunting insect around the world which has increased over the
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 decades could disturb their wildlife distribution in consuming areas.aswellas it has been popular in some other
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 too.as experts count them vulnerable and jeopardise the field of animates because of their nature.for these drawbacks people who are against consuming them insist on making it illegal. In conclusion,consuming edible
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 has become an integral part of some
countries
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 in the east and could be counted as a reliable profit
source
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 for them in, It should be controlled in order to the conservation of them an do not destroy their life equivalence.
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