Some expert believe that it is better for children to start learning a foreign language in elementry school and not in high school. Do you agree or disagree with statement ?

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It is often
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argued
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by many people that it is more beneficial if
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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is taught to
children
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in primary
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rather than in higher grades.
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, I completely agree with
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notion and I strongly opine that secondary languages should be introduced at
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level only
instead
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of
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schools.
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, students in
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elementary
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can grasp much faster
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compared to higher grade pupils. Teaching a foreign
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at
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level will enhance their learning capabilities and will help them to score better in
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academics.
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, in a recent study done in
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it was found that
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who learned
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along with their native
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were able to score better marks in subjects
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as Mathematics and Science compared to those who did not show any interest in learning a secondary dialect.
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, educational institutes must introduce secondary
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along with
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their
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stages of
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for the betterment of a child's future.
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, learning a foreign
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at an early age will definitely improve the vocabulary and speaking skills of the
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.One of the best
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proving
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fact can be seen in Norway where
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are taught English along with their native
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at junior schools.
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, pertaining to
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most of the adults in Norway speak
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at a very advanced level.
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, if other dialects are taught in the elementary
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it will be highly beneficial for the students from the future point of view when they might opt
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for higher education overseas. To, conclude both the native
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and
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language
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should be included in the study curriculum of
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in
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primary schools. I firmly believe, that
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will be highly advantageous for students from
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point of view and it will open a wide horizon of possibilities for them in future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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