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Many would argued that learning something individually or with group.Do you agree or disagree with it?

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Many argue that learning something in a
group
 is more effective than individually. On the one hand,there are many advantages to learning something individually,who learn individually can improve his or her own knowledge about any subject or another thing.And may learn new and new information day by day. But unfortunately,it has a bit problem with it.For,apply example you can not debate every
kind
 of mathematical solvent with your groupmates, friends and with teachers.If you do not know any
kind
 of issues you can not ask any questions from your teacher. On the
second
 hand, learning a
kind
 of information with your groupmates is better than learning individual.For 2 years I attend maths lessons.I have practised many periods.As you know,maths is one of the difficult subjects.
Thus
this
 subject has very different and unusual matters and mathematical problems in it.Learning with a
group
 can improve your communication skill and improve your solving ability rapidly.If you do not know any
kind
 of unusual matter or mathematical problems as I mention you can debate with your groupmates and you try to find new methods to solve these matters.And you can ask any
kind
 of question which you can not answer yourself. Forths On the
third
 hand,it has a few problems with it it can be noisy and you should study different level pupils. To sum up, I completely agree with learning a
group
.It is better to learn something in a
group
 rather than individually.In my ,opinion it is more comfortable than learning something individually
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