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When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Most of the
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, when we meet new
individuals
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 at different places, we judge them very quickly whether gens
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 a positive impact or negative on us. From my point of view,
people
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 should take some
time
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 before passing any commitments. Here I am going to illustrate how quick judgements can be beneficial or disadvantageous for
people
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. First of all, sometimes it can be advantageous for
individuals
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 to make quick decisions as they cannot attach to
people
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 emotionally with the passage of
time
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. To illustrate, in the same situation,
people
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 do not feel good with strangers as they do not get a good vibe from them.
Individuals
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 have a strong intuition about them, maybe an unknown person can hurt them after becoming a good friend. In recent times,there have been a lot of frauds which happened like strangers robbing
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 and they
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 play with their emotions.
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, it is necessary to take a step back when
individuals
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 do not get good intuition from others.
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, there are some situations when
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 are passing through the tough
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.
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, there is a temporary change in an individual's behaviour. So at that
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, it is not a good thing to pass any judgment.
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, sometimes a person is suffering from a health problem or maybe he/she has a family problem.
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,
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 can behave badly.
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, it can be beneficial for
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 to make sharp decisions
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 making new friends. Despite
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,
individuals
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 should give some
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 to other
people
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 before making a judgement

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task achievement
Ensure that each paragraph clearly supports a specific main point and elaborates on it with examples. You can improve the complexity and depth of your ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Use more varied linking words and phrases to improve the flow of your essay. This will help connect your ideas more effectively and enhance the overall coherence.
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Clarify your position in the introduction more explicitly. A clear thesis statement can guide your readers on what to expect in your essay.
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You provided a balanced view by discussing both the advantages and disadvantages of making quick judgments, which adds depth to your analysis.
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Your points about intuition and the potential dangers of quick decisions are relevant and demonstrate practical understanding of the topic.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • first impression
  • initial judgment
  • stereotypes
  • assess
  • non-verbal cues
  • body language
  • appearance
  • facade
  • misjudgments
  • unfair judgments
  • decision-making process
  • social situation
  • character
  • repeated interactions
  • open-mindedness
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