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Some people believe that schools should choose their student according to their abilities. While other people think students with different abilities should learn together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #schools #student #abilities #students
There is an opinion considers that educational institutions should admit
students
 who possess strong abilities. Regarding
this
 idea, many critics have different opinions. From my perspective, I believe that schools have
responsibility
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 to admit
students
 with different academic levels. Providing
students
 who have excellent academic performance with
priority
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a priority
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 of gaining
high quality
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 education resources,
this
 admission policy has many advantages.
Firstly
, it can encourage
students
 to make more effort
on
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 studying to get
a
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good grades and enter a better school, obviously,
this
 effectiveness is beneficial for the improvements of
students
’ educational level.
Seondly
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Secondly
, the
students
 who acquire excellent grades often possess stronger studying ability than other
students
, they are more likely to utilize the valuable
education
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 resources
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a
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high efficiency, thereby promoting the innovation of technology and social progress.
However
, it is
also
 worth
to try
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 to allow
students
 with different academic levels to study in
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 same place
,
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 since it is a possible way to moderate the current social inequality. Since the
students
 who have
a terrible grades
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a terrible grade
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 often come from poor families, if these
students
 gain the opportunities to access
to
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good universities, the
pridicted
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predicted
 income of their families will increase and their
familiy
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family
 members are more likely to enjoy a better life. In my view, I agree with the latter opinion more, because the educational institutions are usually considered as a kind of public infrastructure for a state, that means they should
afforld
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afford
 certain
responsibilties
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responsibilities
 to the society,
therefore
, these institutions should admit some
students
 who are underperformance in academic subjects and origin from the bottom families to do some contributions to mitigate the social inequality.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tailored education
  • prodigious talent
  • career paths
  • segregating
  • competitive environment
  • inclusive
  • diverse learning environment
  • peer learning
  • irrespective
  • stigma
  • lower ability group
  • balanced approach
  • cater
  • inclusivity
  • diversity
  • respect
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