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Computers are being used more and more in education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

#computers #education
There is no doubt that the use of
computer
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 has increased significantly over the
last
 few decades. Despite the benefits that
people
 could obtain in almost all fields, including education,
computers
also
 come with some disadvantages.
This
 essay will elaborate
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plus
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 and minus sides of
computers
 in education.
To begin
 with, the utilization of
computers
 has
became
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 a great support for
students
. Nowadays, any kind of information is available on the
internet
, which could be easily accessed via
computers
. When working on a report,
for example
,
students
 could look for numerous sources
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 the
internet
. Compared to
few
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 decades ago when
people
 should go to
library
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 to collect information, the process could now be done just by sitting in front of laptops. The availability of gadgets
also
 allows
students
 to work on more complex problems. Mathematics modelling could be done in just a few minutes by using computational software,
hence
 the
academics
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people
 are able to focus on developing the ideas.
However
, we need to pay attention to the drawbacks that come along with the presence of
computers
. Since these gadgets could do almost every task,
people
 are getting more
dependant
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to
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 them. Even the job of basic calculations
are
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 being transferred to
computers
, which is sometimes ineffective considering the time needed to turn the
computers
 on.
Furthermore
, a more serious problem regarding
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copyright has been rising as well. The accessibility of
internet
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 is sometimes being used in
a
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the
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 wrong way as
students
 might find other
people
's works on the
internet
 and copy some of the contents for their homework. In a long term,
this
 would have
negative
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 impact
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 the creativity of the young generation. In conclusion, the presence of
computers
 has helped
people
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academics
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 field to work more effectively.
Although
 if being used in
a
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 wrong way,
this
 might bring damage to the young generation when they get too
dependant
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to
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on
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computers
.
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