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Band 5.5

You paid a refundable deposit when you rented an appartment.You left the appartment in good condition but the landlord won't return your deposits. Write a letter to landlord.In your letter Explain why you are writing Ask for teh return of your deposits Inform the landlord of possible legal action

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you regarding a condition about
refundable
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the refundable
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deposit
. I
am inform
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inform
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 you
i
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I
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was moved
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have moved
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 you apartment recently few
day
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. I was giving a
deposit
than
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then
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i
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I
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 enter the flat . You are known about
this
 all things.
Moreover
, I
am
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left
you
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your
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apartment
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an apartment
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in
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a
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the
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last
sunday
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Sunday
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 . I
was know
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knew
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 about my paid
deposit
. Because
i
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I
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 was
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given
gived
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given
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.
In
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first
 enter the flat . I will be giving a time
two
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for two
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day
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days
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 you will
paid
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pay
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 back my full
deposit
.
Furthermore
, I am waiting for two
day
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days
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 only
returning
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to return
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 my full money . After
than
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that
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i
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I
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 will
be take
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take
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 action
on
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against
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you
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your
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 self . And
gone
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went
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 to the police station because it is
my
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apply
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more important for me to send
other flat
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another flat
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. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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Yours
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Your
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 sincerely, Dharma
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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