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How to work with Music and song in English Lessons?

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Songs
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Lessons
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Music
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 is something that we enjoy in the course of our
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. It is
significant
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 aspect of our
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 and their role in
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 classes is very important. Using
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 and
music
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lessons
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 is one of the tools a teacher can
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 to teach
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, regardless of the age of the learners, level of student´s
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music
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lessons
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, including methods,
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, tools and research.
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,
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lesson
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 can incorporate
songs
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, the
language
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 of sounds, rhythms, and feelings.
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 means that the school subject
English
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 could benefit from
music
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use
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the lesson
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English
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 at primary schools.
The attention
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 is paid to
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, especially focusing on their importance in
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 teaching from both theoretical and practical
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 of view. As you can see,
music
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songs
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 have many benefits and purposes
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development
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 of all skills (reading, writing, listening and speaking), activities
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 grammar rules, idioms,
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.
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, D. K. Eken explains how
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 process: “
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 is considered as a strong candidate for making
language
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 learning classroom an optimum learning environment in which learners can increase their vocabulary, enhance their listening, speaking, reading, and writing skills, and develop cultural knowledge.” He provides an explanation
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 how
music
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 plans they have to take the time into consideration. There is the fact that students need more space to work with one song and we should proceed with small steps.
Teacher’s
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 selection of a technique and set of techniques should be based on the objectives for different classrooms. They should prepare an effective plan for each lesson where they would like to
use
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 the song and
music
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. It is
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 important and necessary to integrate all the skills in the process in order to achieve successful teaching.
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, when people are in
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good or bad humour, they listen to
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, we can
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music
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 to evoke a pleasant atmosphere or as a
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 activity. Not too many teachers do it.
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 is one option which might help.
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