Some companies sponsor sport and sports stars as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are numerous

people

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who are at risk of severe health issues because of the increasing trend of being overweight. The cause and the solution will be discussed below.

Unhealthy

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diet

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is the cause

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the growth

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obese

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in the city. The

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included components like high fat, high sodium and high sugar. Fast

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shops are common nowadays because they are able to provide quick meals

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reasonable prices for

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who need to work. Those restaurants sell

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like burgers, chips and other deep-fried foods which include relatively harmful ingredients. With the increase

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consumption of

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apply

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food

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, individuals will gain more body fat and will become overweight. In America, the shops like

Mcdonalds

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McDonald

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, KFC and Burgerking are frequently seen on the street because they are the main type of

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that Americans eat. According to several papers, it found that the average Body Mass Index (BMI) of the United States was higher than

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other countries in the world. It is necessary to tackle the problem by the government to promote and educate the

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on the consequences of being overweight and the way to stay healthy. Education and promotion can help citizens to learn more about the rationale

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getting fat and the method of maintaining a good eating

habit

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habits

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. It is the primary stage to avoid obesity. In Hong Kong, an advertisement was released to promote the importance of the ‘3-2-1’

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which included 3 portions of grains, 2 portions of vegetables and 1 portion of meat.

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’ was promoted in public and the ‘3-2-1’

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was implied to the school's catering services. To conclude, an imbalanced

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is

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reason for the increase of overweight

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and it is important to deal with the issue by promoting and educating

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the

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key to

stay

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healthy.