Much controversy surrounds the ongoing struggle over how governments can safely and effectively manage 'living with COVID' two years on from the initial outbreak.

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The
outbreak
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COVID 19
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pandemic has overturned almost every life in
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universe.
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control the escalating number of infections, many
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impose full or partial
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for an unspecified period- which leads to restricting the mobility of people.
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, schools and other educational institutions are asked to carry out their teaching activities through online platforms.
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, business organisations are requested to make their employees work from home and online purchasing is encouraged
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of visiting stores. Despite controlling the number of cases, these restrictions have resulted in numerous negative consequences,
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as loss of employment,
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of physical, mental, social and economic well-being.
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,
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need to exercise prudence in
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measures to combat the pandemic. It is believed vaccines are effective in mitigating the
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as well as
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reducing hospitalisation and fatality. Many
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countries
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like the Kingdom of Bahrain,
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United Arab Emirates are handling
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worst situation by introducing vaccination campaigns on a massive scale and achieving commendable success.
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, some
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claim curfew can eradicate the
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.
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, there is no
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confirmed evidence to prove its effectiveness.
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Oceania
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imposed a lockdown for prolonged periods, unfortunately, those
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are not able to control the spread
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the recurring mutation of the virus.
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,
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governments
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should make wise decisions by encouraging their citizens and residents to inoculate
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of locking down the country and resulting in a stagnant economy.
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,
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can impose stringent rules and regulations to adhere the precautionary measures
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as wearing masks, social distancing, quarantining the infected and immediate contacts, emphasising personal hygiene and taking a healthy diet to boost immunity. People
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advised to follow the rules strictly and carry on with their endeavours. Society should be trained to live
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the viruses by following precautionary measures and leading a healthy lifestyle.
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can not be solely achieved by
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without the utmost support of the people.
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,
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can emphasise more on medical research and development and provide adequate finance and infrastructure to the health sector.
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,
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will have a proactive approach when they encounter
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disastrous outbreaks and will be able to keep issues under control. In conclusion, locking down the
countries
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for prolonged periods will not be effective for mankind and economic well-being as a means to combat the
COVID 19
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outbreak
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.
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,
governments
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can encourage
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vaccinations, imposing strict precautionary rules,
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and emphasising
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more on
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medical research and development to help society
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live
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the viruses and carry out their routine life without any negative financial and social impacts.
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