Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In

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contemporary epoch, there are individuals who argue that the still rising population will be the

source

of an already unavoidable crisis. While others share an opposite opinion and according to them, population growth is inevitable for the economy and society´s progress

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I am going to discuss both these views and present my own opinion. Contemporary society is a witness

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its own enormous growth, which

however

may be the

source

of issues that need to be tackled as soon as possible. A global crisis is one of the most expected

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, dwindling sources which is already

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unsolvable situation, worsening the issues related to the climate changes, daily rising inflation and new wars on account of a food shortage or policy discrepancies. All these options can have devastating effects on humanity and nature. In connection with

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, I strongly believe that more inhabitants may significantly exacerbate the whole situation.

On the other hand

, a vast number of countries still suffer from

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insufficient economy due to a lack of

labor

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force. From

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point of view,

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population is a noteworthy opportunity for those countries to alleviate consequences related to the aforementioned situation as a

source

of,

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, skilled workers. Linked to

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, I agree with those who argue that the world community should be still rising. In a nutshell, in my opinion, while continuous increasing numbers of inhabitants may be a

source

of world crisis, some particular countries may benefit from it.