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Some people today believe that the world’s increase in population is unsustainable and will eventually lead to a global crisis. Other people believe that world population increase is necessary and beneficial as it creates the growth of the world’s economy and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 contemporary epoch, there are individuals who argue that the still rising population will be the
source
 of an already unavoidable crisis. While others share an opposite opinion and according to them, population growth is inevitable for the economy and society´s progress
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 I am going to discuss both these views and present my own opinion. Contemporary society is a witness
of
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 its own enormous growth, which
however
 may be the
source
 of issues that need to be tackled as soon as possible. A global crisis is one of the most expected
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.
This
 may include,
for instance
, dwindling sources which is already
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 unsolvable situation, worsening the issues related to the climate changes, daily rising inflation and new wars on account of a food shortage or policy discrepancies. All these options can have devastating effects on humanity and nature. In connection with
this
, I strongly believe that more inhabitants may significantly exacerbate the whole situation.
On the other hand
, a vast number of countries still suffer from
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insufficient economy due to a lack of
labor
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 force. From
this
 point of view,
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 population is a noteworthy opportunity for those countries to alleviate consequences related to the aforementioned situation as a
source
 of,
for instance
, skilled workers. Linked to
this
, I agree with those who argue that the world community should be still rising. In a nutshell, in my opinion, while continuous increasing numbers of inhabitants may be a
source
 of world crisis, some particular countries may benefit from it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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