You recently go to a concert and thought one of the singer was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance, give details of your musical activities, explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Rocky,
I am writing to express my sincere thanks from my bottom of heart for your company during the
last
funfilled concert event which was held in the ocean park area. It was like a mind-blowing performance. I can still feel that voice base and audience humming sounds during my deep sleep as well.
I basically used to operate the keyboard only, nonetheless
, during our last
performance I was blessed to be at the drums as one of the drums experts could not able to turn up at our show. At the end of the show, we played the keyboard and drums together which made us feel proud along with your sweet voice.
As we both have some good quality features and I am thinking that why do not we make a new album together? and I am sure that new songs will be delivered across the globe with my huge fan base which is additional support to us. please let me know what do you think ? any suggestions or recommendations are welcome. please do not hesitate to call me on my mobile number.
I cannot wait to make a new album with your sweet voice..!!
Best regards,
Lakshmi.Submitted by lakshma999 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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