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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear
Mr.
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 Gupta, I am Vamsi, your neighbour writing reply to your recent letter reporting about the noise caused from my flat. I am sincerely sorry for the disturbance created for you and your family. I totally agree with your points written to me
last
 week and I would like to present reasons for
such
 annoying noises. The
first
 and foremost cause for
such
 loud noise is ongoing wall construction inside our living room. It's been a while since have been planning to split our big centre room into two portions to add an additional bedroom in order to accommodate my elder son.
Secondly
, expansion of the bathroom as my in-laws are travelling in the coming week.
Nevertheless
, I should have really informed you in advance and taken your permission before starting the work. But due to a lack of time and resources, I was in a bit hurry to take up the repairs and build up the wall. It's my total ignorance and I would like you to accept my apology. Yours sincerely, Vamsi
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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