You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Gupta, I am Vamsi, your neighbour writing reply to your recent letter reporting about the noise caused from my flat. I am sincerely sorry for the disturbance created for you and your family. I totally agree with your points written to me

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week and I would like to present reasons for

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annoying noises. The

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loud noise is ongoing wall construction inside our living room. It's been a while since have been planning to split our big centre room into two portions to add an additional bedroom in order to accommodate my elder son.

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, expansion of the bathroom as my in-laws are travelling in the coming week.

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, I should have really informed you in advance and taken your permission before starting the work. But due to a lack of time and resources, I was in a bit hurry to take up the repairs and build up the wall. It's my total ignorance and I would like you to accept my apology. Yours sincerely, Vamsi

Submitted by vamsi.krishna7 on Sun May 22 2022

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

175 words

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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