You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear madam, I am Lakhvir Singh, I recently saw a
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advertisement regarding one of your
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course
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available
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the
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campus. I am keenly interested to study
advanced
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english
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course offered by your
college
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therefore
,
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want some information regarding
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. Currently, I am living in
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the
Canada, so
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do not have any knowledge related to
this
campus. I want to understand the course syllabus,
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fee and
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. I am planning to get enrolled in Summer,2023 batch as there is no seat available for the upcoming batches.
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Accommodation
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facility is
also
crucial
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issue because
last
year,
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faced a lot of difficulties during my studies in San Diego as my
college
was far away from my rental house. For
this
reason,
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would like to get a room nearby the
college
so that
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can easily commute to
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.
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, I am following
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diet plan as suggested by
physician
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,
therefore
,
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require
same
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arrangement
at
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living
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place. Kindly share all of the information that
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described in
this
letter
,
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so that
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can make arrangements
accordingly
.
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Your
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sincerely, Lakhvir Singh
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