Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

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Nowadays everyone thinks to born as a personality as they can fulfil all their wishes but, being a film star has both advantages and problems as well. With the benefits of ,stardom anyone can rule the world. Here, we discuss the pros and cons of being a star.
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with, they are easily recognised by society and could get consideration everywhere.
for example
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, Cristiano Ronaldo who is the best football player in the world goes to any complex he can easily attain love and respect from the people.
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, being a star feels like conquering the world, reputed companies around the globe are ready to pay a big amount of money for doing Ad shows which leads them to a luxurious lifestyle by sponsoring luxury cars and branded clothes. The families of these successful people
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achieve a luxury and successful life. On the other, each coin has two phases to reveal so we cannot neglect the disadvantages behind the stardom.
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, the media is the greatest rival of the celebrities and they are always ready to interfere in their personal life sometimes, they make fake news to increase their show TRP.
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, the die heart fan's stardom would try to copycat them and they consider them a role model.
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, celebrities do Advertisements for tobacco which could have a bad image on society ,especially among youngsters. In the conclusion,
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there are many profits in getting rich and popular ,one cannot keen into the disadvantages in it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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