You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear madam, I am Lakhvir Singh, I recently saw a Facebook advertisement regarding one of your
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courses available on the American campus. I am keenly interested to study the advanced English course offered by your
college
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therefore
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want some information regarding the
college
. Currently, I am living in
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Canada, so
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do not have any knowledge related to
this
campus. I want to understand the course syllabus, its fee and its duration. I am planning to get enrolled in Summer,2023 batch as there is no seat available for the upcoming batches. The
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accommodation
facility is
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issue because
last
year, I faced a lot of difficulties during my studies in San Diego as my
college
was far away from my rental house. For
this
reason, I would like to get a room nearby the
college
so that I can easily commute to the institute.
In addition
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diet plan as suggested by a physician,
therefore
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require the same arrangement
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my living place. Kindly share all of the information that
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described in
this
letter
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so that
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can make arrangements
accordingly
. Yours sincerely, Lakhvir Singh
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