The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Smoking is one of the most insecure factors
that
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harmful
for
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health. Despite
this
many
people
keen
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on
this
bad habitude.
This
essay will discuss two main causes of
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in society and the measures to prevent
it
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. The key aspect of increasing smoking is
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influence
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of stress in
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daily life.
Furthermore
, nicotine is contained in cigarettes
lead
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to
relaxation
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of
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organism. IN course of time, it became
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condition to
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the stress. Most
people
who smoke think that smoking is the best way to deal with
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they faced every day.
For example
,
people
who work in big companies smoke during the day to reduce the nervousness of their busy schedule. Another key factor is an
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surrounding, which
exert
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pressure
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young minds and
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to
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smoke to prove their coolness.
In addition
, some
people
consider that smoking can raise the status of a person
between
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peers.
However
, there are promising solutions
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this
problem.
Firstly
, the government should implement
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tax on cigarettes. If the authorities raise the price of cigarettes,
then
people
will start buying less of them.
Secondly
, there should be an age limit for smokers.
As a result
, if
this
is established, the number of young smokers will decrease , because
people
under the age of 18 cannot get it. Another way to improve the situation is to develop anti-smoking campaigns , which should make
people
face the consequences of
such
a bad experience. In conclusion, there are many factors that lead to the promotion of smoking, all
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that cause significant harm to health.
However
, it
also
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particular solutions for
this
issue. I recommend
to draw
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the attention of the government to what a major problem is smoking
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