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Altho nowadays people are reading News through internet newspaper still remains of value. do you agree or disagree?

#people #news #internet #newspaper #value
It is true that in
this
 contemporary world, the population gives high preference to the internet for reading News but I believe it does not mean that newspapers will lose significance in
this
 world because it is accessible at cheap rates.
To begin
 with, the newspaper is considered an emotion by some folks like reading the magazine with a cup of tea is a hobby for several communities because it provides knowledge about surroundings is writing which does not put a strain on the eyes of the reader as the modern technology gives
such
 as sight disorders.
For example
, I remember that my grandfather read the journal in the morning after waking up
instead
 of using high tech gadgets because it is difficult for them to shift to gadgets from newspapers.
In addition
 , another benefit of paper reading is that these papers are approachable at a reasonable price even poor people can afford
this
. To elaborate, many crowds around the globe do not have smartphones or they have apathy toward using modern mobile phones and computers which is not a cup of tea for them because.
Last
 but not least, proponents can read the news without any interaction which can be occurred to poor internet connectivity or advertisement popups.
For instance
, reading news on gadgets is absolutely a daunting task for people who live in far-flung areas due to the bad connectivity of signals. To conclude, I reiterate that the newspaper is a major source of information around the globe due to its affordability.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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