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Some of today's schools insist that all students have their own laptop computer in class to assist in their education. Do you feel that this would be an advantage to student's education or would it be an unnecessary complication?

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Many schools
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 to learn in
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 because personally there is
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 form to teach at school. When I was young I
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computer
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 or tablet in
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, I studied with books and
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 only. I learned to
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computer
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 but in
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class
.
This
 method was
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suggested
. Nowadays,
tecnology
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technology
 is everywhere because we consider it as a tool,
therefore
 it is normal that we can find it in
class
. Talking about advantages we have to mention
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 of
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possibilities
teaching
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of teaching
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 with media
resourses
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resources
such
 as videos, graphics, or
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.
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tecnology
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technology
give
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endless
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ways to improve our educative system.
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 advantage is to
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prepare
 children to
use
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tecnology
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technology
 in each area of their life. I do not know what method is better but I think the society
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of
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tecnology
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technology
in
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 many things. So teaching with laptop
computer
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 could be bad
to
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 young people. Youngers
use
 the
tecnology
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technology
 like the mobile phone a lot of hours per day. They spend their time with video games, computers, etc. So I think that
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 them to
use
 these objects at school too would not be the best choice. Each day the
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addiction
 of people
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 and maybe we must help them and
to
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avoid the
use
 of it at schools. In conclusion, assisting the education in
class
 with computers is a relevant
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resource
 but it could be dangerous because there is a problem with the time which society spend using all of it.
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