Alcohol plays an important part in the lives of many people. However, some problems are connected with alcohol use. In what ways can the use of alcohol be negative for an individual or a society? How can these problems be overcome?

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pinpoint possible ways of dealing with it. In essence,
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consumption creates problems in
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drinker’s families , friends and communities. Most consumption may be damaged the internal parts of the body and the mind, harm the population other than the drinker
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and can have negative consequences for
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as a whole. It is commonly believed to play a role in decreased worker productivity Due to lack of concentration and
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aggression and violence against others, and child and spouse abuse. Despite these challenges, it is possible to resolve these paints through educational campaigns and government facilities. National campaigns
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can be promoted consumer information that people need to understand more about what
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contains. Adolescents should teach in school about
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’s drawbacks. They shouldn’t use or moderate drinking sometimes.
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if the government provides more welfare and recreational facilities for
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, concern about jobs, housing and the future can be worried. If people have social welfare, having happiness and tranquillity and entertainment in their life not only will not be inclined to
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of awareness and a moment of
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consumption controlled or get rid of it. Experts in government and
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allocated more time and planned
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