The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since
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a number of years, the population from the countryside move to big metropolis for various reasons and
consequently
capital
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the capital
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centre has a
shortage
of housing.
However
, the national government is the only one to tackle
this
issue. I am fully agreed that the authority has the main responsibility to have sufficient housing in commercial cities and I will discuss how to prevent unnecessary side effects in
this
essay.
Firstly
, the main reason that causes the
shortage
of housing
in
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apply
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downtown is increasing the population of
migrate
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from
countryside
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the countryside
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to developed
area
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areas
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to work as the daily workers, especially in construction sectors and many industries. Societies are moving to
centre
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centres
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which
offer
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greater employment and a higher standard of living.
For instance
, most of the city's life can access the internet, mobile banking, and convenient transportation system.
As a result
, accommodation places are more and more demanding significantly for blue-collar workers who can only afford
a low budget houses
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.
Secondly
, another reason is that several side effects have
been
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occurred
such
as
water
shortage
and electricity getting by hourly.
This
means that the accommodations and domestic
water
supplies cannot be separated in urban life while the population and urban
water
system ratio are not equal, there will be many consequences related to people's health problems ,
for example
, people cannot use sufficient
water
amount for their
water
and sanitation purposes.
In addition
to that, big city life is having good practices and management systems for household waste. If the governments cannot control daily waste, the diseases of
diaherra
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diaspora
and flu can be spread easily. In
this
case, people have to spend extra charges for their health. To sum up, increasing insufficient numbers of houses in cities cause not only utility
shortage
but
also
negative effects on resident health problems. To prevent the problem mentioned above only the head of the nation can be solved the issue. Personally, I believe that the authorities have the
responsibilities
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to support the country to be
developed
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and arrange national finances to build sufficient housing in the country’s gateway cities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • public housing
  • overcrowding
  • affordable housing
  • rent control
  • property market
  • infrastructure development
  • sustainable living
  • rural-urban migration
  • real estate regulations
  • zoning laws
  • bureaucracy
  • gentrification
  • economic disparity
  • housing policy
  • social welfare
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