The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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a number of years, the population from the countryside move to big metropolis for various reasons and

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centre has a

shortage

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of housing.

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, the national government is the only one to tackle

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issue. I am fully agreed that the authority has the main responsibility to have sufficient housing in commercial cities and I will discuss how to prevent unnecessary side effects in

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essay.

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, the main reason that causes the

shortage

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of housing

in

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downtown is increasing the population of

migrate

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from

countryside

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the countryside

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to developed

area

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to work as the daily workers, especially in construction sectors and many industries. Societies are moving to

centre

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which

offer

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greater employment and a higher standard of living.

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, most of the city's life can access the internet, mobile banking, and convenient transportation system.

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, accommodation places are more and more demanding significantly for blue-collar workers who can only afford

a low budget houses

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a low budget house

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.

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, another reason is that several side effects have

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occurred

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as

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shortage

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and electricity getting by hourly.

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means that the accommodations and domestic

water

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supplies cannot be separated in urban life while the population and urban

water

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system ratio are not equal, there will be many consequences related to people's health problems ,

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, people cannot use sufficient

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amount for their

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and sanitation purposes.

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to that, big city life is having good practices and management systems for household waste. If the governments cannot control daily waste, the diseases of

diaherra

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and flu can be spread easily. In

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case, people have to spend extra charges for their health. To sum up, increasing insufficient numbers of houses in cities cause not only utility

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but

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negative effects on resident health problems. To prevent the problem mentioned above only the head of the nation can be solved the issue. Personally, I believe that the authorities have the

responsibilities

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to support the country to be

developed

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and arrange national finances to build sufficient housing in the country’s gateway cities.