our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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Dear Roy, I am writing to you to express my sincere apologies regarding the huge noise which is making you inconvenience due to some drilling

work

in my garden area as there is some plantation

work

in progress and it may take a while to get complete and I would request you to please excuse me for another two days to complete the

work

. As

this

is being informed by other neighbours as well,

hence

I would like to cover the whole drilling area with some soundproofs nets which would stop the huge noise to explode.

Furthermore

, I decided to do the drilling

work

on weekdays only, so that most of our community people are away from their homes for their daily office

work

. I am promising you that the above-mentioned points would not make you get disturbed again and thanks for all the support during

this

time. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Mon May 23 2022

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1Word repetition
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6 paragraphs

151 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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