you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

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Dear Sarah, I write you to say thank you so much for arranging a wonderful holiday week. It was

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a great memory for me! I couldn't imagine how my holiday would be without you. Your house is really great and fantastic.

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, your food is incredibly delicious! But I'm having a problem right now. I have been trying to find my wallet in all of my bags but I couldn't find it so I think I forgot my wallet in your house and it's probably on the table in the living room. I was in a hectic situation when I lelf the house so I didn't check my stuff before I go. That's my mistake. I want you to help send it back to me and I will definitely cover all the costs. Would you mind packing my wallet in an envelope and deliver to the post office? I have seen a post office nearby your place and it's around 5 minutes by walking from your back door. I'll be very appreciative if you can do it. Warm Wishes, Rawisara

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

181 words

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you have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, and when you got home, you realized that you have left your wallet in your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend; thanking for the holiday explaining that you left your wallet at their place providing instructions on how to send it back

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter • explain your situation • describe your problems • tell him/her when you think you can start.

Many young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating high school. What do you think are the reason what an be done to teach them this important skills

Some people say that music a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this

Industrial visits are an important aspect of a student's education, give your opinion