Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In

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contemporary world, the majority of governments believe that economic progress is

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significant factor rather than other developments.

Moreover

, some communities argue that they want to get equal importance

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other developments for a better tomorrow.

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view and I will give my opinion too.

To begin

with, currently,

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economy is the backbone of the country . Wherever citizens are provided job opportunities by local authorities when there has

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economic progression.

Further

, as long

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monetary departments always strive to increase

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economy

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various productive factors especially, exporting products to international countries.

For example

, Srilanka has faced economic collapse due to political corruption and it caused

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in management fluctuations in goods and other products. As result, when we live in

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, we are able to face critical situations in our lifetime.

On the other hand

, education, health and trades are the other sectors which want to develop in every nation.

Furthermore

, education is

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vital key factor for

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and wherever we have a quality and standard education, we will become

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literacy society with a high proportion among other nations.

For instance

, Australia decided to improve their healthcare system, by giving free healthcare services

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their

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citizens.

Consequently

, it demonstrates the standard and progress in their motherland and

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environment

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their population. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe that local authorities should want to implement plans and schemes to develop

economy

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and other sectors in

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equal manner. Unless

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get necessary steps to rise up, we are definitely able to face

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issue

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because of their weaknesses in management skills.

Thus

, undoubtedly, we will face economic and social collapse

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our communities.