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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The graphs illustrate the difference between now and how it will change after
next
 year of an airfield. Overall, after, a development some structure appearance will be changed,
however
, some still are the same. The upside of the southwest airport shows a significant difference. The number of gates will soar, from eight to eighteen.
Moreover
, the walkway would change into a sky train. The structure below the airstrip
also
 changes a lot. There are no shops, bag drops, or ATMs now, but they will be redeveloped in the future. Plus, the number of cafés will slightly increase.
Although
 there will be a huge difference in the future, it still has some were will not change.
Such
 as in the middle of the installation. The location of security passport control and passport control customs stay the same, not only for that the departure and the arrival
also
 would not change.
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