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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home , leisure and work activities To what extent do the benefits of Information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

#information #technology #aspects #lives #home #leisure #work #activities
In recent
time
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 information technology play
major
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 role in everyone's life and in all
field
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fields
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. IT changes the way of living and at
present
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 influence our home,leisure and work activities. I strongly believe that
positive
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 impact is higher than
the
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negative because
of
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it helps human life in many ways. On the one hand , with the help of IT we are secure our houses from the
theaf
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thief
 apart from
this
 it
prevent
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 our home application from the damage like air conditioner , refrigerator and more.
In
addition
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 IT the entertainment in our free time with help of different applications
sach
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such
 as
netflix
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Netflix
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 , youtube.
Also
 with the help of
IT
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 we can do hard tasks
in
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very easily like artificial intelligence
moreover
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same
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 time and very conveniently in large companies as
a
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 example in Amazon company the number of robots are connected to the each other with help of cloud and gave information to each
others
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 and do work in
very
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 quick way and provide quality work
also
 provide the transparency to the customer.
On the other
hand
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 it
harm
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 human lives in various ways due to information technology many application take our private data like e-mail id, bank passwords and our likes and dislikes and sell them to the other giant companies without our permission.
Beside
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this
 people lost their jobs due to IT as
a
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 example during
covid
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 -19 period many companies
develop
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 their own facilities like AI and fire their employees. To conclude, while, it
harm
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 human lives. Not only
it
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provides
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 more facilities to
human
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humans
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 in
various
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way
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,but
also
 it provides entertainment to us.
Therefore
i
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I
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 believe that
advantages
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the advantages
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are outweigh
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outweigh
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 the disadvantages.
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