In many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

A popular and growing trend around the world is making

payments

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various products and

services

through mobile

applications

alternatively

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as online payment software. In my

opinion

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this

reality has more merits than demerits, with the benefits of being convenient and

realible

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reliable

.

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on the other hand

the possible demerit is unsuccessful payment.

To begin

with,

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the major

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reward of mobile

applications

is convenience.

This

means that it is easy for people to purchase

good

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goods

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or

services

and pay its bill

via

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online

instead

of

them

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those

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who carry cash in their wallets.

For

example

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many supermarkets and malls encourage their buyers to pay for

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the item

an item

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item

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items

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they buy using specific online Platforms

such

as Google pay. Another advantage of

this

online app is reliability.

This

implies that when

customer

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customers

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pay

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for goods or

services

online, they can easily verify the identity of the businesses through detailed information provided on

this

platform. Take Amazon as

a

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example when users select

this

e-commerce store it gives complete information about the business and supplier of the item. Irrespective of these benefits, it is impossible to overlook the

attendent

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attendant

cases of failed

payments

associated with online

payments

.

This

indicates that when mobile

applications

are used for quicker,

fatser

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faster

and

secure

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payment. Some

payments

become unsuccessful due to poor internet connection. So it is one of the main

reason

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reasons

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that

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why many Indians have given dissatisfied feedback on

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the Access

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bank mobile application, and

this

is

as a result

of frequent cases of money deducted but the recipient not receiving it. To conclude

this

topic,

while

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apply

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paying for

product

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products

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and

services

by using online

applications

is a marvellous and amazing idea. But failed

transaction

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transactions

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cannot be ignored. If

internal

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an internal

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connection can be improved in many countries of the world, mobile

payments

would be more effective.