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In many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

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A popular and growing trend around the world is making
payments
of
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for
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 various products and
services
 through mobile
applications
 alternatively
know
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 as online payment software. In my
opinion
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this
 reality has more merits than demerits, with the benefits of being convenient and
realible
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reliable
.
Where as
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on the other hand
 the possible demerit is unsuccessful payment.
To begin
 with,
major
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the major
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 reward of mobile
applications
 is convenience.
This
 means that it is easy for people to purchase
good
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goods
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 or
services
 and pay its bill
via
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apply
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online
instead
 of
them
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those
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 who carry cash in their wallets.
For
example
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 many supermarkets and malls encourage their buyers to pay for
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the item
an item
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item
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items
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 they buy using specific online Platforms
such
 as Google pay. Another advantage of
this
 online app is reliability.
This
 implies that when
customer
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customers
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pay
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 for goods or
services
 online, they can easily verify the identity of the businesses through detailed information provided on
this
 platform. Take Amazon as
a
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 example when users select
this
 e-commerce store it gives complete information about the business and supplier of the item. Irrespective of these benefits, it is impossible to overlook the
attendent
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attendant
 cases of failed
payments
 associated with online
payments
.
This
 indicates that when mobile
applications
 are used for quicker,
fatser
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faster
 and
secure
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more secure
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 payment. Some
payments
 become unsuccessful due to poor internet connection. So it is one of the main
reason
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reasons
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that
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why many Indians have given dissatisfied feedback on
Access
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the Access
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 bank mobile application, and
this
 is
as a result
 of frequent cases of money deducted but the recipient not receiving it. To conclude
this
 topic,
while
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apply
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paying for
product
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products
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 and
services
 by using online
applications
 is a marvellous and amazing idea. But failed
transaction
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transactions
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 cannot be ignored. If
internal
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an internal
the internal
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 connection can be improved in many countries of the world, mobile
payments
 would be more effective.
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