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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of the argument and then give your opinion.

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Nowadays
computers
 are
constant
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 part of our everyday life. Education is the most discussed advantage or disadvantage of these devices. The main point is that negative and positive impacts are real but
sometime
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 can be ignored to reach the educational goal.
Firstly
,
computers
 do our
studing
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studying
 much
more
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easier
then
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 a few decades ago. Now
students
 don't need to write by
hand
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some
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essays, diplomas and so on. What's more, today no paper books are required to prepare
to
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 exams. Just a few clicks and information is right in your hands. Another point is that archive documents and other data
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 stored on disks
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computer
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the computer
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 which makes it comfortable to find, manage and collect. No more hours
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spend
spended
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spent
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 in
library
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the library
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like
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 our parents did.
On the other hand
, there are many
oponents
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opponents
 of using
computers
 to educate. Maybe due to the lack of modern experience older tutors believe that
computers
 make
students
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lazy.
As a result
, these teachers force
students
 to write papers by hand on numerous pages. The main disadvantage of
computeres
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computers
 in education is cheating. There is always a chance that pupils copy and paste the text from the Internet and pass the task given. In the
conclusion
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 I would like to say that despite controversial opinions computer is a part of our development and we cannot ignore its pros. These modern devices save our
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leading
learning
 time giving
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 opportunity to combine two or more specialities. In my university
life
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 I was sometimes extremely grateful to
this
 device for not wasting time in the library. In my opinion,
students
 now are able to cover divergent topics and qualifications
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 our predecessors just 20 years ago.
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