It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is necessary to make sure that students with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at
school
. I agree with
this
statement. I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs. Ensuring
kids
with a wide range of abilities mix with each other at
school
can teach
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to be
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a wise
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person
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.
They
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with good abilities are not allowed to be arrogant
people
especially at
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the academy
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because they think have good capabilities.
For example
,
kids
who have good ability in math should help their
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who
have
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difficulties in
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s because
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nobody
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no body
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nobody
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is perfect, and sometimes
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condition can happen. They need help in other subjects from their friends. Not only in
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the academic
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area
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,
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they
also
need help from other children when they have
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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,
such
as when they get
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an accident
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in
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road
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outside the institution. Ensuring children from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at
school
is important to teach how
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respect to
other person
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another person
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.
Therefore
, students from all social and economic
background
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backgrounds
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must give
respect
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, if
kids
want to be accepted
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social
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the social
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environment.
For instance
, students in
kids
will become friends with each other without looking from
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the good
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economic or poor economic
background
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backgrounds
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.
Consequently
,
childre
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children
will have many
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teammate
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because they believe that children are
humble
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a humble
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person
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people
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. If we have
good
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a good
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society, many
people
have the chance can help us when
face
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problem
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problems
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in some areas when they meet us. In conclusion, mixing with friends at
school
is very important.
This
is because we can not live independently without other
people
. Sometimes we need help from other
people
and opposite condition
also
can happen often
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  • Navigate
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  • Strive for Improvement
  • Unique Talents
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