It is important to ensure that children with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is necessary to make sure that students with a wide range of abilities and from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at
school
. I agree with this
statement. I will explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.
Ensuring kids
with a wide range of abilities mix with each other at school
can teach how
to be Correct pronoun usage
them how
wise
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a wise
person
. Fix the agreement mistake
people
They
with good abilities are not allowed to be arrogant Correct pronoun usage
Those
people
especially at academy
because they think have good capabilities. Add an article
the academy
For example
, kids
who have good ability in math should help their mate
who Fix the agreement mistake
mates
have
difficulties in Change the verb form
has
this
s because Correct your spelling
nobody
no body
is perfect, and sometimes Correct your spelling
nobody
opposite
condition can happen. They need help in other subjects from their friends. Not only in Add an article
the opposite
academic
Add an article
the academic
an academic
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
,
they Add the word(s)
but,
also
need help from other children when they have Add an article
a problem
problem
, Fix the agreement mistake
problems
such
as when they get accident
Add an article
an accident
in
Change preposition
on
road
outside the institution.
Ensuring children from a variety of social backgrounds mix with each other at Add an article
the road
school
is important to teach how give
respect to Add the particle
to give
other person
. Change the wording
another person
other people
Therefore
, students from all social and economic background
must give Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
respect
, if Wrong verb form
respected
kids
want to be accepted by
Change preposition
in
social
environment. Add an article
the social
For instance
, students in kids
will become friends with each other without looking from good
economic or poor economic Add an article
the good
background
. Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
Consequently
, childre
will have many Correct your spelling
children
team mate
because they believe that children are Correct your spelling
teammate
humble
Add an article
a humble
person
. If we have Fix the agreement mistake
people
good
society, many Add an article
a good
people
have the chance can help us when face
Replace the word
facing
problem
in some areas when they meet us.
In conclusion, mixing with friends at Fix the agreement mistake
problems
school
is very important. This
is because we can not live independently without other people
. Sometimes we need help from other people
and opposite condition also
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