Many cities are now turning parks and farmland into new housing developments. Is this a positive or negative development?

Recently, there has been a rise in the infrastructures

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as apartments even in suburban areas. While the increase in houses has provided various benefits to the public staying in villages, I feel that turning farmlands and parks into apartments is a negative development for several reasons.

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and foremost,

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leads to

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in the

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. Due to a rise

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population and growing needs for shelter, more and more trees are being cut and farmlands are turned into living areas.

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, if we see it in a broader way,

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can lead to

deforestation

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on a large scale.

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, in the United States, specifically in the Chicago

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, which once was

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dense farmland and a village, was converted into a great

infrastructre

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infrastructure

, leading to

deforestation

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in most of the areas.

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, the most important reason is the migration of inhabitants and wildlife from one

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to the other due to a rise in construction. What

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means is that

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most people surviving on farming and the farmlands become jobless, and are shifted to other parts of the city due to

homelesness

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homelessness

. Needless to say, the animals local to the

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have no option but to leave the locality and travel to

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places in order to survive. Not only does

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make the animals

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migrate

to newer surroundings but

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create

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issues

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as inadequate food and inability to adjust to the surroundings. Eventually,

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could lead to the death of most of the species. In conclusion,

deforestation

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and migration of wildlife and humans are the main problems caused due to

buidling

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building

houses.

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, for these reasons, I believe that

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had led to a negative development

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