You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter - Correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Johnson I am writing to inform you about some mistakes of

information

relating to my hometown which appear in your international travel magazine that I have read recently. In the following content, I will state the detailed incorrect

information

and give you particular promotional advice. The fault

information

about the background of a famous attraction must be correct. In your article, the historical story of the temple has been described in the wrong way. In fact, the design idea of

This

fascinating building originates from the traditional custom which can stand out in the culture of my motherland.

However

, you describe it come from the modern world. What’s worse, it will misguide the tourists that the construction is a copy work. The negative social effect of

this

mistake is the main reason why you should make it right. If the fault

information

hasn’t been adopted, not only the social development of my town but

also

the reputation of your magazine will be affected seriously. Because the scenery will lose its cultural value as an important symbol of my hometown which can improve the local economy. What’s more, the obvious wrong edition will show your unprofessional. In conclusion, I suggest that you should set up a serious assessment process to avoid

such

a situation.

For example

, do abundant research about the materials that you will post. You can consult professional workers who know about the real situation. I am looking forward to your improvement as fast as possible. Yours faithfully!