you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, in your letter, - describe the situation - explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention
towards
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the difficulties faced by me in
room
number 26 which I share with four other students at William Harry college. At the onset, if I describe the situation
of
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that
room
, it is not appropriate to live. Because it is a
room
that a maximum of two students can share but we are four in number, it is impossible to adjust and sleep in
this
room
comfortably.
In addition
, two boys from us have
least
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concern about cleanliness which is making the situation
of
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the
room
unbearable. many problems have been faced
by
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me while using washrooms and finding my things like books and clothes.
Moreover
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there
are
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just two
almirah
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without locks, so how can I anticipate the security of my belongings in the
room
?
Hence
, it is the toughest task for me to adjust
in
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the
room
.
Lastly
, I request you kindly consider
my
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preferences that I have mentioned in my
first
request letter to you. Some of them, I would like to mention here again
such
as a single
room
or sharing with just one other person, there must be one separate almirah at the accommodation and clear written instructions to other people about the hygiene of the
room
of the accommodation is on a sharing basis.
Thus
, I believe you will find a new place for me as per my preferences. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown
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