you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, in your letter, - describe the situation - explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter to draw your attention

towards

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the difficulties faced by me in

room

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number 26 which I share with four other students at William Harry college. At the onset, if I describe the situation

of

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that

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, it is not appropriate to live. Because it is a

room

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that a maximum of two students can share but we are four in number, it is impossible to adjust and sleep in

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room

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comfortably.

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, two boys from us have

least

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concern about cleanliness which is making the situation

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in

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the

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unbearable. many problems have been faced

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me while using washrooms and finding my things like books and clothes.

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Moreover

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there

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just two

almirah

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without locks, so how can I anticipate the security of my belongings in the

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?

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, it is the toughest task for me to adjust

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the

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.

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, I request you kindly consider

my

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preferences that I have mentioned in my

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request letter to you. Some of them, I would like to mention here again

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as a single

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or sharing with just one other person, there must be one separate almirah at the accommodation and clear written instructions to other people about the hygiene of the

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of the accommodation is on a sharing basis.

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, I believe you will find a new place for me as per my preferences. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Harry Brown