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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The given blueprint provides a visual representation of an aviation station in the present time and a year after
once
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it is developed. Overall, there will be a huge change
of
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in
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 the plane gates in the future and some services will be available for people to use.
In
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 the south to
west
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the west
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, there is now a booth for departing passengers to check in on the left whereas the coffee shop is on the opposite.
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, it is planned that the cafe will be relocated to be closer to the door because of the replacement of the airline registration unit while the luggage drop machine will be put at its old corner. Towards the southeastern part, there is no service provided nowadays but in the future, the visitors can buy beverages, deposit cash, and even rent cars to drive around the city. In the middle, there will have been passport screening points for both departing and arriving
travelers
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 as the same. Between the travel document checkpoints and all eight gates for departure located in the northern part of the building, there is now
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 empty area.
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, another ten gates will be added with more convenient indoor transportation to commute within the airport and the shop will be opened up for customers to buy necessary goods before getting on board.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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