You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: •Congratulate him/her for also being accepted •Ask him/her if he/she would like to be your roommate •Discuss possible activities that the two of you could do together Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ___,
#friend #study #program #paris #france #•congratulate #•ask #roommate #•discuss #activities #two #addresses #___
Dear Rachel,
I just heard the fantastic news that you’ve
also
been accepted to the study abroad program in Paris! Congratulations! I’m so thrilled for both of us; this
is going to be an incredible adventure.
I was wondering if you would like to be my roommate while
we’re there. It would be so much fun to share the experience with you, and we could explore the city together. Plus, it would be great to have a familiar face around, making the transition a little easier.
There’s so much we could do! We can visit iconic landmarks like the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre, take leisurely strolls along the Seine, and indulge in delicious French cuisine at local cafés. I’d love to spend a day wandering through Montmartre or checking out the vibrant street art in Le Marais. Let’s also
try to learn some French together to help us get by.
Let me know what you think! I can’t wait to hear from you.
Best,
Trang DaoSubmitted by minhtrang.dao on
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task achievement
The overall response is complete and effective, covering all the required points. Ensure deeper elaboration on each point for enhanced clarity.
coherence cohesion
While the logical structure is well-organized, consider more connecting phrases to enhance the flow between ideas.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are clear and friendly, creating a warm tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph relates to a single idea, maintaining clarity and focus.
task achievement
The writing tone is suitable for a friendly, informal letter, engaging and inviting for the reader.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,