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A friend of yours has always admired your car. You have now decided to sell it.

#friend #car
Dear Tim, I am writing you
this
 letter because I have
decide
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 to sell my
car
. I know that you have always wanted to have it so my
first
 decision is to notice you
to
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know if you would like to buy it. It has been a difficult decision because I like
so
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it so
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 much my
car
, but you that I will move on
next
 month for a year and I have to leave it here. I would like to sell it to somebody who
care
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it
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,
therefore
 you are my main option. You know the
car
 is
perfectly
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 and is
completelly
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completely
usefull
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useful
. It was
succed
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succeed
 in
last
mecanic
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mechanic
 exam and he, the
mecanic
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mechanic
, said me that It will in good state many years move. I know that you know perfect my
car
, but if you want, you could
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came
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 my house tomorrow to try it and make a
desicion
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decision
. I really would like that you buy it due to you are my best friend and the
car
 is special for me. I am looking forward to
hear
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about
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from
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 you. Best regards.
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